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Thursday, May 2, 2013

Figurtive language

Author's Note: This is a short story that includes figurative language.


I was as hot as the sun, standing in line for the roller coaster at Sea World called kraken. My sister was scared to death to ride Kraken. As we reached the front of the line we loaded the coaster looking at my sister her face was as red as a tomato. As we took off we started going up slowly but surely we got to the top and we dropped and I look over and my sister and she was screaming like a baby as the wind cool as ice blew through our hair. It was as fast as a racecar as we flew through loops and corkscrews and then it ended. As we unloaded the car my sister said, "that was the best thing she had ever done”. 

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